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[Dream Adventure!]

Seen this somewhere....

Oh yeah that's right. Pretty much you mimicked the concept from Braid right? Its okay, but you could of put a little more effort into the text. Its the same as Braid's text.

Could use a little more creation and the sound was sometimes choppy, but as you say "it is rather unpolished" I can't complain all that much.

Good effort at best.

Emptygoddess responds:

The same as Braid's text? Braid is full of oddly lyrical surrealist prose that hint at something that may or may not be. Seeming to say more then it says, and without making anything like concrete sense hint at something bigger.

I wish it was the same as braid's text. I can't write like that. I can't even steal that well.

[T E T R I S ' D]

Meh

Pretty good, Its nice and fluent, not much of a stop any where. Keep up the good work, I like the feel of it.

KobraEditing responds:

Thank you!